I was quite excited with the news that WildBird on the Fly's First Friday contest was being revived. It combines two of my passions, birds and writing. More than that I find that trying to write a 500 word story, within the constraints of the contest, an excellent exercise for building my writing skills.
I've also been very lucky at the contest, having won twice before. And my luck continues to hold as for some reason they've thought my story good enough to win the revived contest. Kudos to Amy for bringing it back. I encourage anyone who writes to give it a try, the next deadline being December 3rd.
Here then is my winning story…
Tye pulled his jacket tighter around his neck. “Damn wind,” he said to
no one in particular. He stomped his feet, willing circulation there,
and wondered if he’d get any visitors today. They were a strange lot,
the bird people, traveling all this way to see a gull. Of course, once
he stopped to think about it, his was a strange job.
Tye was an
egg guard, hired by the Feds — not that he didn’t mind the work, but
there couldn’t really be people that would come all this way to steal a
bird’s egg. No matter how rare it was. At least he wouldn’t screw up
this job.
He’d come up north to make his way in the world, his
parents happy to see him out of the house. They’d still hoped he’d go
on to University, but he could barely handle high school. They’d nagged
at him constantly to get out of the basement, so he did. Took the Pinto
they’d given him when he got his licence and pointed it to Thompson.
He
found work right away, in the mine. Hated every minute of it. When the
foreman caught him sleeping instead of knocking loose rock from the
ceiling, he was fired. That night in the bar, he fell in with some
tourists, and before he knew it, he was on the train. Brian, who worked
for the port, let him crash on his couch and told him about the egg
guard gig.
He shook his head again as he raised his binoculars, puzzled by the absurdity of it all. Still it was a beautiful gull, a Ross’s Gull.
Until three weeks ago, they were all seagulls to him. This one was
small, dainty almost, and he’d never had dreamed a gull could have a
pink breast, but these ones did. He looked up when he caught sight of
the dust.
The plume of dust told him someone was coming, and
soon the taxi pulled up. He smiled when he saw the two Germans get out.
They’d been coming every day for the last week to see the bird.
Different than the others, they spent more time talking with him, and
they always brought coffee. Today was their last day in Churchill. He
was glad for the company of someone who preferred him to the bird.
Dieter
poured him coffee, while Brigit nodded hello but stood on the opposite
side of the road, already raising the binoculars she wore. Dieter
looked off the other way, towards the coast, lines creasing his
forehead. There was a bear close, Dieter told him, pointing to the
coast, and they both scanned the horizon. It was early for bears, and
after fifteen minutes, they still hadn’t seen anything. Soon Dieter was
pouring him more coffee.
Brigit joined them, so he handed her
their thermos. He had already turned back to the coast as she deftly
took off the bottom of the jug and slid the dark speckled egg inside.
Comments
5 responses
you already used the word – deftly done.
Way to go – great story!!
Woot! Awesome job.
Egg thiefs, eh? Very well crafted story. Congrats!
Thank you Indigo, this contest is a lot of fun, and not just for bloggers…
Thanks sis, of course you’re family and have to say its great.
Thanks Patrick,
Thank you Levon. The story is actually (loosely) based on a real incident back in the 80s. The Canadian Wildlife Service posted guards on a Ross’ Gull nest at Churchill and an egg was stolen by thieves distracting the guard. They were caught at the airport with the egg hidden in false bottom of a thermos.